06 May 2007 @ 11:04 pm
Book 12 Chapter 19 叫び Trans-summary  
Japanese to Chinese translation by Hinako. Chinese to English translation by me.

This is a translation-summary of the chapter immediately following the end of Book 11 (as a refresher, check out [livejournal.com profile] sargraf's summary).

A couple of minor issues before we get to the summary. Someone informed me that Motoharu's last name is Kikkawa instead of Kitsukawa so I've corrected that in a previous translation I did. Gomen. ^_^; In my attempts to accurately translate names from Chinese back to Japanese, I've concluded that 口羽 reads as Kuchihane, although I've this gut feeling that it's wrong, so if anyone could provide me with the correct name or some sort of confirmation I'd be most grateful ^^. (口羽 - Kuchiba) Thank you [livejournal.com profile] kat_tyan!

Of course I welcome any other corrections to my translation too. ^_^

By the way, the chapters in these novels are actually numbered according to the story arcs rather than the individual novels. Just thought I'd mention that in case anyone was wondering why the first chapter of Book 12 is Chapter 19 LOL.



As you know, Naoe was shot at the end of Vol. 11 and he lasts for about a minute into Vol. 12 before dying in Takaya's arms. Takaya basically loses all control of his emotions and powers. I translated about 3/4 of the chapter and will summarize the rest.

I've also included some [Takaya] and [Naoe] tags in later paragraphs since it can get quite confusing with all the 'he's and 'him's without any names. If you're lost anywhere, feel free to ask.

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An outcry, like a mangled echo, resonating through the blaze and blood-tinted world.

At that moment, Takaya abandoned everything. Calling his name, Takaya hurried to Naoe's side and clasped his body.

"Naoe! Naoe!"

As soon as he held his body, blood began to emanate from his left chest, trickling onto the ground, as he heard the final cardiac beats. It was a clean shot through the heart. A large pool of blood had accumulated on the ground. Takaya shook Naoe's slightly convulsive body intensely, madly shouting unceasingly without regard for his own life.

"Naoe! Naoe! Naoe--!"

There was no answer.

His lips were quivering in shock. Naoe's limp body rested against his arm, his slightly-opened eyes looking out.

In that fleeting moment.
Their eyes met.
His lips trembled a little.
But that was the end.
Naoe's head rested on his arm, without any strength.
Then, a static silence.

All the muscles in his body relaxed, his strength faded.

"..."

Takaya's eyes widened. All thoughts came to halt. He only stared at Naoe who was dying. Closing his eyes, his face buried in Takaya's chest, Naoe drew his last breath. Terumoto, who had opened fire, was already dead from the violent recoil of the pistol.

But Takaya did not look at him. His arms felt heavy, holding on to the motionless body. Takaya's white wafuku was stained with Naoe's blood, gradually turning to a scarlet red.

Takaya remained stationary. He did not blink, his eyes transfixed on Naoe lying in his arms. His dry lips soundlessly called his name.

Naoe...

For 400 hundred years, he had called no one else's name as many times, and now he once again murmured repeatedly.

Takaya could no longer say anymore.
...Naoe... ...has been shot.
Shot... And then...

***

"Saburou-dono!"

A figure appeared from the flames, Kotarou had finally come. Upon seeing the form of Rairyu, Kotaro was alarmed and immediately raised his guard.

"Rairyu!"

"!"

Rairyu, who had been paying attention to Takaya, turned his head and swelled in power. Kotarou instantly prepared himself for an attack.

"Saburou-dono! Saburou...!"

Midway, Kotarou could not help but stop calling.

Takaya enfolded Naoe's body in a tight embrace. Holding him closely, holding him with every inch of his strength, desperately seeking for any sign of life from the body.

However, any small flicker of life no longer existed.

"Naoe--...!"

The words of sorrow that left Takaya's mouth stole away what fighting spirit there was between Rairyu and Kotarou. Takaya listlessly held on to Naoe's body that still had some semblance of warmth. Blood was still flowing out of the aperture in his left chest. Hearing the flow of liquid with the rusty smell of blood, Takaya mumbled once again.

"...Naoe..."

Takaya could not accept the fact of what had happened before his very eyes.

Only just a while ago was he relating his heart's intentions but now his lips could no longer move. Not even the smallest breath could be issued. Hoping that he would answer, Takaya gripped his languid fingers, but his body no longer exuded any hint of strength. Some warmth lingered in his body. But...

"..."

Takaya did not move. He remained motionless, as if staring into a void. So much that it made one wonder if his frozen predicament meant that he had forfeited his life, Takaya's entire body was locked in a rigid state.

Kotarou wanted to approach him. But in that moment, he heard Takaya murmur.

"...what... is this..."

Takaya's eyes were fully open and he mumbled in a hoarse voice.

"This... What is this..."

The heavy body that rested on his arm, the blood that stained his fingers bright-red, the sunken cheeks, the mouth slightly ajar, the unmoving eyelids, the hair...

"A nightmare--..."

Mumbling in a low voice, Takaya gazed at Naoe's face.

"Can I... wake up already?"

He uttered at the lips that no longer answered, the eyes that were no longer focused.

"I want to wake up from this sort of nightmare. Everything will be fine once I'm awake, right?

No matter how sincere or hopeful his query, there was no answer from the body.

"Naoe."

Takaya's expression crumbled into sadness as he cried out imploringly.

"Naoe--......"

Kotarou placidly regarded the two of them. Takaya held Naoe's head in a close embrace, gently rubbing his own cheeks against Naoe's warm face.
"Answer me, Naoe..."

By his ears, he begged with heartfelt intentions.

"I don't want to continue having this sort of nightmare. I want to wake up immediately. Naoe, come and save me. Take me with you... I want to wake up straightaway, quickly return to the reality of this world..."

The dry eyes did not blink.

"Return to the reality of this world..."

The last piece of warmth had left the body.

"Return..."

These closed eyes will never open again. The depth reflected in these eyes will never...

"A world... with you..."

Takaya's eyes gradually became moist. The spiritual vigor that had supported Takaya's life all this while could be heard collapsing. There was no reason or logic to be had, his entire spiritual constitution deteriorated into a cry of grief.

"Ah.....Ah.....!"

A mass of intense electrical energy erupted from Takaya's body. The high-voltage current extended in all four directions, tearing through in a chaotic manner.

"!"

The severe, haphazard discharge of power forced both Rairyu and Kotarou to shield their own bodies. Gusts of wind began to encircle the area, sweeping up the flames. A tremendous amount of energy progressively expanded from Takaya's body. It far exceeded the strength of a human - surpassing the limits of control, dangerous, ...powerful, a formidable force that could destroy everything.

"AHHH...AHHHH..."

Takaya could no longer control the fierce outburst of emotions.

"AHHHH!!!!"

Crying out with all of his feelings surging from within the depths of his soul, Takaya's body was falling into ruin with the explosive emission of energy.

He's going insane...!
Kotarou, sensing the unprecedented danger at hand, could not help but shout out.

"Saburou-dono!"

That startling cry, as if wanting to set the heavens on fire, shook the skies in its resonance.
The devastation of the world.
Takaya's staggering grief brought forth an alarming amount of destruction to the area.

***

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Here we switch to Kikkawa Motoharu who's standing around Chrysanthemum Beach when he hears the explosion from the square of Hagi city. He reacts in shock and senses the deeply mournful atmosphere that now clouds the area. A violent earthquake then rocks the district accompanied by thunderous sounds.

Motoharu tries to make his way through the blazing storm raging across the rubble and debris to find out what exactly is going on and nearly suffocates in the intense heat. He finally sees the level of damage done to the city center and feels Takaya's cry of misery tearing through his soul, capable of causing damage if he stayed in the vicinity for too long. He tries to go looking for Terumoto but is restrained by Kuchiba who requests for him to seek refuge in the Yamato (name of their battleship). In the chaos, Motoharu remembers Naoe's words about Kagetora's uncontrollable power as he realizes who is responsible, and calls Kagetora a monster.

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There was no one left to stop him.
The only person who could contain Kagetora's uncontrollable power no longer existed.
Everything had been burnt right to the core in a fierce black flame. Takaya, kneeling, still held on to the remains of Naoe. One could discern that his eyes no longer reflected anything else but insanity.

Rairyu was no longer there. Did he flee or had he been burnt to ashes? Such that not a sign of him remained.

"Sa...buro....dono--!"

Kotarou managed to support himself with a great deal of difficulty. He stabilized his Goshinha1, drawing upon all his power to stop Takaya from going out of control. But all of his efforts to communicate with Takaya were in vain.

If this continues, Hagi will crumble.
And not just crumble, it will be completely annihilated. If Takaya's overwhelming power was not placed in check, not only the city but the entire foundation of the delta would disintegrate.

Don't do this, Saburou-dono!

But Takaya was already locked within his madness. The boundless power that had been unleashed, such that the ground all around had long been upturned by the destructive forces, began to induce a turbulent motion from beneath. However, nothing could stop this.

Nothing could suppress his actions.
Everything will perish!
Kotarou shouted with all of his strength.

"Saburou-dono ----!"

--I will always be by your side. Forever.

The voice that cannot be heard.
The feelings that can no longer be felt.

--I won't leave you again. Until the day you be the death of me, I won't be killed by anyone else.

You swore to me.
You promised me.
I believed, that only this oath was the ultimate truth.
Saying that you would never die...
Saying that you would never let death leave me alone, you promised me!
Didn't we make this promise, Naoe!

Death approached, surrounding him, rapidly stealing his warmth. Takaya attempted to resist by transmitting half of his own body heat to him [Naoe], but Death sneered at Takaya's futile struggle and took him [Naoe] away.

No...!

The flames of Hell surrounded Takaya himself. Desperately holding onto the cold deceased body, Takaya burst into tears as he cried.

"No...Ahh...!!!"

A fiery wind assailed his hair. His skin was scorched by the flames. However the blood that flowed out was cold, dying his chest black. The words he [Takaya] heard so vividly firmly remained in his ears. It was that clear. His arm's strength that embraced him [Naoe], his fingers pressed into his flesh, so much that his [Takaya] body's heat was branded onto his [Naoe] torso, around his waist... his back, his chest.

--I love you...!

He remembered those words in his ears. That voice. The plain declaration that was nearly akin to throwing up blood. It seemed like Takaya could hear his true confessions of pain and grief. Not very long ago. In fact, he heard it just now!

Takaya cried out, twisting his entire body. Words drowned in a startling cry of grief.

His soul flared up. His mental faculties started to collapse, piece by piece. Takaya was going mad. Losing control over his expanding destructive power, Takaya himself was about to be cauterized.

To continue in this manner, Takaya will die. At this point, if no one intervened, Takaya will die.

"Ahhh!!!"

His brain was boiling. His cells were rupturing. His blood was flowing in the opposite direction, about to burst out from his insides.

"Ahhhhhhhhhh----!!!"

The gaseous sound of a spray could be heard, the intensity of the blaze becoming more ghastly. The district of Hagi city had changed into a frightening mass of flames. The countless sparks of fire that flew out began to burn the streets of the city.

Voices of wailing could be heard as the people scattered away from the area. The streets were being bombarded by a meteoric rain of fire.

Holding on to the bony remains, which was all that was left of Naoe, Takaya raised his head towards the sky. His outpouring emotions had surpassed all limits, his consciousness was rapidly fading. Tangerine rays of light began to dance about his body, resembling fireflies. Those were spiritual fragments being stripped away from Takaya's soul. His shouts had finally been subdued by this storm of madness, Takaya closed his eyes in subsidence. A ferocious flame engulfed Takaya and Naoe, as if to extinguish their bodies.

"Don't, Saburou-dono ---!"

Kotaro shouted out.

"Saburou-dono ---!"

Suddenly, a strong wind blew across his head.

The blazing energy that engulfed Takaya and Naoe was smothered before Kotaro's eyes.

What...!

Some sort of huge pressure covered the area above. Like an immense biological power threatening the crazy flames, bringing about a humble calm.

A white light shone all around. The radiance bore a divine elegance that poured into the impure environment. Kotaro contemplated the celestial being in astonishment.

"!"

A great dragon appeared in the sky.

It was not a fire dragon. This dragon that radiated the luminous white light was something far more majestic. A beautiful luster was reflected off its scales; its eyes, profound and impenetrable. The long trunk of its body glided in a wave-like motion, floating in the air as it regarded Takaya.

Kotaro knew. He knew the true appearance of this dragon. He knew the actual identity of this dragon.

"Uji...yasu... kou2..."

He was Kagetora's biological father - Hojo Ujiyasu, in the manifestation of a dragon.

His father emerged once again due to his son's extreme delirium and now hovered over him as he was losing consciousness. The dragon gazed at Kotaro, gesturing with its head, flew towards Takaya. The strong winds and the fiery tempest gradually weakened as the radiance diffused in.

Ujiyasu extended his coarse arm, as thick as a tree trunk, towards Takaya. Still holding on to Naoe's skeletal remains, Takaya slowly let go of his [Naoe] body as he collapsed into Ujiyasu's hands.

He was no longer conscious.

Takaya's body, so close to destruction a few moments ago, laid horizontal in the hands of his biological father.

"Ujiyasu-kou..."

Kotaro callously looked up at the dragon, sparkling with a silver radiance. Ujiyasu once again moved his body in one great spiral, carrying away Kagetora in his hand, towards the horizon.

Kotaro ran over to the remains of the body. Just to make sure, Kotaro once again surveyed Naoe's pulse, testing for any hint of breath. But Naoe was completely dead. He was truly dead.

"Naoe--..."

Muttering, Kotaro closed his eyes. He had experienced countless deaths calmly without a tinge of emotion or regret, and now he was silent in prayer? He bitterly wrinkled his brow as he knelt down.

After that, he slowly got up, taking out a bottle of sacred oil and quietly poured out the contents over the remains, in a Buddhist manner. A gust of wind blew across and the fiery conditions began to intensify again. It would be dangerous to linger around. Kotaro picked up a burning piece of wood and threw it onto the body, igniting its remains.

A pale fire arose.

This was a hellish cremation. But if the remains were left as it is, sooner or later, the police would arrive at the scene and start an investigation.

Furthermore, it would be better if Kagetora did not see this. He would not be able to endure this.

Kotaro looked up to the sky. In mid-air, Ujiyasu was directly looking his way.

"Follow me."

Ujiyasu instructed Kotaro, changing his direction as he moved towards the horizon.

The fires were still burning under the night sky of Hagi.

The land had been scarred by the shocking brutality and misery of the madness. A continuous police siren howled all over Hagi city.

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From the deck of the Yamato, Motoharu sadly watches Hagi city burn and thinks of Terumoto while his retainers gather around him. His followers are also in despair and Kuchiba asks what do they do now. Motoharu decides, with a heavy sigh, that they'll head for Itsukishima (another island, in the Inland Sea of Japan) and orders the crew to set sail for Innoshima. He hopes to meet with Takakage and his company, to draft a plan to take over Itsukushima with the support of the Kure regiment of fighters. This new plan boosts morale among the retainers.

Motoharu ponders over his purpose and decision (they just lost their fort and have no other route to follow) and is a bit lost without Mouri Terumoto. However he decides that he will continue to fight to maintain the Mouri clan, as long as he continues to breathe.

***

Hakkai (part of the Uesugi army and a Nokizaru investigator; we first meet him in Vol. 10 I think... crap I seem to have forgotten all the plot details in 10-11 after my exams but anyway...) basically arrived at the island in the afternoon the day before, after splitting up with Ayako at Akiyoshi-do (this huge cave in southern Akiyoshidai). Just when Takaya was starting to lose control, he was preoccupied with surveying the area for any unusual activities and he notes an area covered by a powerful kekkai. Inside the kekkai are the Mouri clan soldiers, being subjected to rigorous interrogation with no one willing to walk on the streets. He carries on unnoticed, detecting the triangular kekkais of the Toukou-ji and Daisho-in temple groups. Then just when he sensed Kagetora's and Naoe's kekkais, Mount. Kasayama erupts (courtesy of Kagetora).

The result is a chaotic situation within a blazing tempest. There're firemen on the scene and Hakkai sees the entire topography of the land deformed and changed in the cataclysm. The policemen and firefighters try to control the situation and no one is allowed into the city. Hakkai senses an intense feeling of longing in the area, so strong that it can incur injury if one wasn't careful, and understands that the person who cried with all of his soul's strength was Kagetora since there was no other person who has this level of power. Hakkai decides that he wants to at least ascertain Kagetora's condition.

He hears some noises coming from the city center as if they found a body. They're bringing out a charred corpse, and he's unable to make out if it's male or female, but stares at the body in inspection - looks like a man, a hole in his left chest, like he was shot with a handgun. Starts to panic because the body's size resembles Takaya's, so he does some quick approximation of his height, taking into account the reduction from having been burnt, and concludes that he's too short to be Takaya (much to his relief).

Hakkai observes the confusion all around him, thinking that it wouldn't be surprising to find the victims reduced to bones; in fact, the fire was so intense some may have been burnt to ashes and became part of the ground, with no remaining traces. He aimlessly walks around desperately trying to search for any signs of Kagetora and Naoe and worries that they might really be gone. Hakkai calls out continuously even though there is no answer, as he stumbles about the area.

Then he sees a white radiance, vaguely at first. The mass of light is initially stationary on the scorched earth, then takes a human form, peaking Hakkai's curiosity. It takes the form of a bearded man on a white horse, who calmly looks his way. On his head is a white hood, he doesn't wear any armor, just a long blade by his waist. Although the figure is not very tall or impressive in physical stature, he appears to be a seasoned warrior who has experienced many battles. The scar on his face, the intense eyes, resembles the appearance of a souhei (a sort of warrior monk). Hakkai is rendered speechless and just stares. Then the souhei looks at him directly, moving into an attack position, with his back to the sea, emitting a dazzling light and waits for Hakkai's first move.

1 Goshinha - wave of self-protection
2 I've noted that Kotarou seems to address Ujiyasu as 'dono' in the anime, however according to the translations I'm working with, he addresses Ujiyasu with the honorific of 'kou' (similar to the way Naoe addresses Kenshin), I'm still trying to figure out the correct form of address

I think I've reached the point where I really must ask, does Kenshin care about Kagetora at all? Please tell me there's some sort of valid reason to his (seemingly) lack of concern because I'm starting loathe this character. Heck, even Nobunaga is better. Yes, because Nobunaga is outright evil, and you expect him to behave as such. Yet Kenshin, who's supposedly so unquestionably divine and holy, is such a bastard of a father to Kagetora (or at least up until Vol. 20)? So not only does he not bother about Kagetora losing control of himself out of misery but he's OK with the fact that Takaya was about incinerate not only himself but the entire island together with everyone else (enemy or not). Or don't tell me he had a holy vision that Ujiyasu would go rescue his son from going down in a blazing tempest LIKE HOW A FATHER SHOULD REACT WHEN HIS SON IS IN DANGER. >:E Nevermind that Ujiyasu is trying to get Kagetora to leave the Uesugi and return to the Hojo - when I think about it, isn't it sort of natural that the father would want his son to return to his birth clan. He may have plans to use Kagetora's power to rebuild Hojo's status but doesn't Kenshin have his own motives as well. Yes, I'm mighty pissed off at this character, especially when we're told how much Kagetora adores him. I just can't think of any reason that would justify Kenshin's impassiveness at the moment, maybe someone would like to enlighten me.

I kind of pity Kotarou. To keep it brief, he doesn't actually remain emotionless throughout the subsequent novels and here we see the first hint of feeling from him. I think, crazy or not, Kagetora just has this ability to stir up feelings in even the most stoic of men people.
 
 
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[identity profile] sabriel75.livejournal.com on May 7th, 2007 01:50 am (UTC)
Thank YOU!
You have mentioned being really busy... so I just want to say thanks for all the translations. Also, I agree with you about Kenshin. The fan fic story I am writing... he's going to be a jerk to one of the non-canon characters I have created, because I need an explanation of how he can function the way he does. He's an absolute ass of a father to Kagetora. Plus, doesn't he later give Naoe all the power when Kagetora is at his most vulnerable instead of trying to help fix him. He's crap. I agree. Someone needs to enlighten me because I don't think very highly of him at all!
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[identity profile] quaint-twilight.livejournal.com on May 7th, 2007 12:09 pm (UTC)
Re: Thank YOU!
Ohh, I want to read your fanfic :) Yes, Kenshin leaves Kagetora in the dumps while appointing Naoe as the new leader. I was so annoyed that I really wanted Naoe to kick his ass but at least Naoe's betrayal should be quite the slap in his face. :P
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[identity profile] kat-tyan.livejournal.com on May 7th, 2007 11:12 am (UTC)
Great job! By the way, 口羽 is pronounced as "Kuchiba".

crazy or not, Kagetora just has this ability to stir up feelings in even the most stoic of men.

My thoughts exactly ^_^
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[identity profile] quaint-twilight.livejournal.com on May 7th, 2007 12:10 pm (UTC)
Arigato!!
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[identity profile] kuroraka.livejournal.com on May 7th, 2007 07:59 pm (UTC)
Thanks a lot for the translation!^^Do you mind if i add you? Most of the other MoB fans on my flist seem to have fallen off the face of the fandom and/or the internet...
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[identity profile] quaint-twilight.livejournal.com on May 8th, 2007 02:02 am (UTC)
I don't mind ^_^
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[identity profile] arcanelight.livejournal.com on May 7th, 2007 10:39 pm (UTC)
Wow. Thank you so very much for all your hard work. This part was even more heart-wrenching than I had imagined. This series just loves to twist the knife, sometimes I think I'm a masochist for loving it so much. And yes, my vote is with you about Kenshin being an ass.
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[identity profile] quaint-twilight.livejournal.com on May 8th, 2007 02:04 am (UTC)
Don't we all love torturing ourselves with this series lol ^_^;

Good to know that I'm not the only one who dislikes Kenshin -_-
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[identity profile] labingi.livejournal.com on May 8th, 2007 02:34 am (UTC)
Thanks so much for doing this! I'm very glad to get a chance to read this part. I've heard little, wee bits of summary of it, but it's so much more coherent when you can actually read the story:)

Kenshin I don't understand at all. I have next to know sense of him as a person. Does he even still function (psychologically) as a human being, or has he transcended to some god-mode of existence where the rules are just different? That might explain his incredible non-interference.
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[identity profile] quaint-twilight.livejournal.com on May 8th, 2007 04:16 am (UTC)
From my understanding, I see Kenshin as having ascended to a form of higher existence... not really quite god-like IMO.

The problem I've with him is that he seems to only interfere whenever it seems like his plans (whatever they may be) are in danger of falling apart, e.g. when Kagetora is tempted to return to the Hojo (anime ep.9), when they needed the help of Ieyasu to defeat Ujimasa, etc. but completely ignores Kagetora's personal issues (like how much he's suffering because of and with Naoe; he doesn't even bother to tell Kagetora WHY he was fired from the Uesugi army which results in Kagetora thinking that he couldn't meet Kenshin's expectations or didn't do enough).

I mean how is that any different from the way Ujimasa sent Saburo all over Japan like a Hojo chess piece?
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[identity profile] labingi.livejournal.com on May 9th, 2007 04:12 am (UTC)
I agree Kenshin is utterly sucking as a "human" father. The only excuse I can make for him that in his new plane of existence, being a human father isn't really his proper task anymore. By analogy, one could argue that "God" doesn't overtly support people a whole lot in human terms, but that doesn't mean that God isn't doing what a God is supposed to do. I guess. I wish I had more information on what Kenshin's actual state of being is though.
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[identity profile] kat-tyan.livejournal.com on May 8th, 2007 04:36 am (UTC)
Kenshin actually transcends to a god-mode only after resurrecting Naoe and entrusting to him the future of Uesugi clan. That is, he stops being a person and cannot manifest himself before Uesugi anymore. But before that he is supposed to have a human personality (I think).
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[identity profile] lufro.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2009 07:26 pm (UTC)
Thank for your translation!
Here is some fanpic http://lufro.deviantart.com/art/Mirage-of-Blaze-Death-of-Naoe-118228804
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